On a different note please comment on my work... any advice/cruel comments anything will be appreciated because only that way can we better ourselves
Thankx


DreamsDreamsDreams
Dreams at night reveal the extent of my pain Flowing through my vein like lava in the earth's core God is such a bore, the father of vast punishment Laughing with such fulfillment toying with our lives Sharpened knives separate us from wings
Silently forth he brings confusion with freedom of choice Losing your voice he takes it away showing us fate Come forth and mate, the playground is so cold As I am growing old the night turns to day Who will you obey?
Mario Avram © 2002


HomeworldWhat Lies Within HomeworldHomeworld
Come with me to the place where I belong To the place where I don't know when we go Come with me to the place where we belong To the place on the other side of.... me
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Voices in my head driving me insane Hearing the laughter of the dead And the sorrow of decaying remains
Screeching yells and moaned words Listening to the inviting wailing I am about to switch between two worlds
CHORUS: Widening gap of remorse &


Terra CimmeriaTerra CimmeriaTerra Cimmeria
Freezing touches of the dark On my slowly beating heart Contaminate my shadow Slowly moving crystals To complete the decay
The devil appears in a bid to gain my essence He tricks me into taking his cinder flame In burns within my heart turning it to ash It's as if there is no escape from total decay
Then true light comes along With the flight of an angel Its pain reflects my own Yet it shines through My defiled gloom
The angel has now clipped its wings To be with this undeserving soul The angel has n


Remorse by MTARemorseRemorse by MTA
Despicable times I've died through all All too far, all too hollow But I know its just me The memories cut through My mind gone so wrong The razor sharp as ever Will continue to sever
All for you... no now for me All for you... not now, not ever
It's so cold out in the darkness But your radiant beam burns my soul It's so scorching out in the light But your darkened heart will shackle me
Mario Avram ©2002
i never got a chance to read over a lot of your poetry, but i feel ... content ... that it still lives on. you were an inspiration to us all, i miss you heaps mate. wherever you are, i hope you haven't laid the quill to rest; the words you pieced together so fittingly for yourself and everyone will never be forgotten.
-hugs- rest in peace.
Thanks for the comments on my poems. I appreciate the feedback. Regarding the "diarrhea" reference on [link] it is meant to pull the reader back from the dimness of memory into the mundane world of "the present." I felt a startling, ridiculous word was needed, and decided to also make a connection back to what the pigeons were doing to my car.
I don't think I've gotten around to your gallery yet, but you are on the list. And since you took the time to read my work, I'll bump you to the top of that list.
Cheers!
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When you keep getting pelted with shitballs, you gotta get youself a shit-bat.
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let us not forget it was these same types people who cried "do nothing" dont get involved in Europes conflicts " who allowed stood by and watched in the comforts and safety of their homes while Paris fell poland burned and six million jews were burned alive
Every nation which has ever existed has been born and/or owed its existance to what it has "stolen" or conquered
the Vikings ..The Egyptians.. the Romans germany japan China and on and on ... When Rome was the dominant power in the world .Rome was absolutely CERTAIN of her rightness. And later after thousands of years in power When she was conquered .. her conquerers were absolutely CERTAIN of their rightness. when England ruled the seas and the world at large with Spain .. the kings and queens of thse countries were CERTAIN of their rightness ..The Spaniards Conqured Mexico.. England attempted to own the " New World" Washington Jeffeson et al resisted and defeated the english .. The American pilgrims and immigrants conquered the natives of the new world ..later Lincon and the northern "yanks" conqured the "rebs" and the south..
setting free the slaves brought here by ENGLISH and SPANISH slave traders who bought and brought most of the slaves the new world from other African rival tribes .. most of their enemies sold to the slave traders as enemies of their tribes.. AND they were CERTAIN of the rightness of their actions.
ALL OF THESE COUNTRIES PEOPLES GOVERNMENTS ETC were in their eyes just as certain of their rightness and their right and need to defy the opposition..billions throughout history have died resisting the current tough guy on the block.. it has and will ever be so.. those who seek peace should have sense enough to see that there are those who do not..and will not!!! and ultimately will destroy those who want peace especially those who are unwilling to fight against those who will take what the peace seekers want by force and will silence their weak willed protestations with a violent end.
As for me.. I will honor all those who have and who actually ARE NOW fighting against terrorism evil and those who would replace our freedoms with a tyrranical religious order which by the way.. a religious order which if any one refuses to convert to .will destroy all non converts all.. thats A-L-L INFIDELS..... WELL.. you folks who whine and complain about those who have guts enough to stand and fight while you use the freedoms they won and continue to win for you ..meanwhile I will continue to HONOR
those people who fight to preserve fredom even for those same whiners to be allowed to speak and live and die free!
and now ... ADIEU
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pi is good
kids are for trix, at least thats how the bunny god seeks justification
visit me [link]
visit him [link]
~COMMENTS~pretty please?
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Today's Pig, Tomorrow's Bacon!
dude check this out, we're both on there. [link]
it's like a collage of a whole lot of DA icons of writers. he must of just found us through different peoples pages.
hope all is well Mr. Mario
peace
- vinnie + peenut's nemesis = peenuty goodness
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pi is good
kids are for trix, at least thats how the bunny god seeks justification
visit me [link]
visit him [link]
~COMMENTS~pretty please?
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